remiX zank

 

 

 

 

                                                                                                       berem

 

                                                                                                       luščim

 

                                                                                                       pišem

 

                                                                                                       zbrišem

 

                                                                                              manj je več

 

                                                                                     več je kič

 

                                                                           čas beži

 

                                                              s slike me gledajo

 

                                                        neme oči

 

                                      narišem oris

 

                   po opisu ničnosti

 

         ob steno postavim

 

na glavo obrnjeno

 

         platnico

 

jo okrasim

 

z neprevelikimi črkami

 

         ker morajo besede

 

zadeti v bistvo

 

         duha

 

še malo posanjarim

 

         o nastanku sveta

 

                   metafiziki

 

         o kipečem ekosistemu

 

                   pa

         o tem

 

         kako čudovito

 

                   bleščeče

 

                   so lahko

 

                   kapljice

 

                   iznad

 

                   vodnjaka

 

                            berem berem

 

                                      prelistavam

 

                                      oblike

 

                                               naslikam     

 

                                                        skak a joče

 

                                                                           črke

 

                                                                                     ki se preganjajo

 

                                                                                              sem    in

 

                                                                                                       tja

 

                                                                                     ko se mi roka  zaleti

 

                                                                           ob migljajoče

 

                                                                  iskre

 

                                                        ki veličastno

 

                                               opazujejo

 

                            vsakdanjo rutino

 

                        in na koncu

 

                   se spet

 

         z odvezanimi očmi

 

         vrnem

 

k vprašanju

 

o

 

tem

 

kako

 

sploh

 

napisati

 

pesem

Sara shiney

Helena Zemljič (MalaSenca)

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Poslano:
28. 04. 2014 ob 13:22

tekoča pesem ... ki se odlično bere :)

LP, Shadow

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Sara shiney

Poslano:
28. 04. 2014 ob 14:53

hvala shadow za komentar ;)


lp

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