
Give me the true reason!
Why have you let my heart go?
Don't deny it!!
I can stil hear your words telling me:
Our hearts are too deviant,
and you got what you deserve.
This loss is an achievement for me
Get out of my life!!
The sky is black for me
even the rain is now black for me.
You were like a drug to me
I couldn't live without you,
but you were killing me from the first day we met,
I was so addicted to you
and I was so blind.
Now when you're gone
you're like a grouesome haunting nightmare!
This loos is a achievement - This loss? is/These loos are/ an achievement
The sky is black for me
even the rain is now black for me.
"For me" zveni 'slovensko'. Mogoče si mislil: the sky seems/appears/looks black (to me).
Že glagol, kot je "seem", nakazuje, da gre za subjektivno zaznavo - ni potreben dodatek (for me/to me).
LPJ!
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Napisal/a: Dox
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