The queen of sin II

You are my idol
My idol of sin
I dream I could worship
You make my head spin

 

I'm dreaming about us
Years we've been gone
We hide in some city
The show would go on

 

People forgot us
But I kept our spark
The room might look different 
But it will light up the dark

 

I dream I could rerun
Our twisted romance
Get high by your perfume
Get weak by your glance

 

I never could read you
Nobody could
You kept things within you
Like they were no good

 

You had little virtue
But that was okay
You stayed true to your pleasures
You made it your way

 

But now you want change
You want to be good
This isn't the way
Not everyone should

 

Don't do this to me
Don't flush down my liquor
You might leave a heartache
But that was your sticker

 

Stab me with fire
Don't bore me with love
In cage full of pigeons
You were the dove

lukapirc

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urednica

Poslano:
17. 11. 2024 ob 15:04

Fino teče tole


Ena slovnična zagata:

I dreamed I could worship
My statue of sin
Breathe in your perfume
/Tasted your skin/

And to taste your skin?


Lp L

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lukapirc

Poslano:
21. 11. 2024 ob 22:31

Lidija pozdravljena

Hvala za pozorno branje, a mislim, da mi je kar všeč tako kot je. Tako je nastalo in nebi spreminjal. Ko poem nastaja se ne upiram, saj ko enkrat začnem miselno razčlenjevat, nastane zmešnjava :)

Ampak iskrena hvala za vso dosedanjo pomoč in podporo. 

Lp 

Luka

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lukapirc

Poslano:
26. 02. 2025 ob 16:21

(Preurejena)

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Lidija Brezavšček - kočijaž

urednica

Poslano:
27. 02. 2025 ob 10:55

Super :)

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