Heart beat avtor MARJETKA

Pozdravljena, Marjetka, in dobrodošla na portalu. Tale tvoja pesmica v angleškem jeziku bo potrebovala kar precej popravkov, preden bo zares zrela za objavo. Mrgoli osnovnih slovničnih napak in samo približno prav ni dovolj dobro. Ne jezi se nad mojim komentarjem, ampak napakice so osnovnošolske, vredno jih je popraviti (raba odvisnika : if stavek, pa še druge, naštela bom osnovne):

If the wind would take me
anywhere i want,
If the wind could take me
anywhere I wanted,
i would go in a place
I would go TO a place
where birds are singing all the time,
where grass is always green
and ur heart beats for ever!
and your heart beats forever.

But there is no place like that...

(Because ali 'cause) cause birds cant (can't) sing for ever forever
and grass cant (can't) stay green,
only ur? (your?)heart can beat in my mind for ever! (forever)

Če je v pesmi toliko pravopisnih napak, se smisel izgubi in pesmica hrepenenja postane angleška domača naloga, ki jo je treba popraviti :)
Brez zamere,
LP, Lidija