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Thinking happy thoughts - bp

Thinking happy thoughts avtor bp

Pozdravljen in pohvala za imenitno preigravanje besed, pomenov, zapisa in fonetike.

Opozorila bi na dvoje:

The world gets so full of people and things,
who are not more then numbers to wannabe kings.
>>> v tem primeru mora biti thAn (then = potem), vendar še vedno ne bo prav, kajti ker gre za samostalnik (ljudje in stvari), ne pridevnik/prislov, mora biti NOTHING, ne NOT
>>> pa tudi WHO ni pravi veznik, ker gre ne le za ljudi, tudi za stvari - v takih primerih uporabimo THAT
>>> that are nothing but numbers to wannabe kings

The numbers are full of makings of things,
the world is no more than numbers in strings.
>>> ista stvar - svet (samostalnik), za njim NOTHING
zaradi ritma predlagam takole:
>>> the whole world is nothing but numbers in strings

Lep pozdrav,

Kerstin (not a queen :))
 

bp

bp

Poslano:
26. 01. 2010 ob 00:13

Sem popravil, hvala lepa, Kerstin, my queen, thanks for all the poems you screen, for helpful suggestions, and things that you question, for rhyme & reason, rhythm in between.

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