Yoda, si dal to najprej v delavnico PREVEDI PESEM? Če si, se
oproščam, nisem videla.
Kakor koli, prevod potrebuje nekaj popravkov:
Prevod ( Street - Yoda ) avtor
Yoda
Drip by drip
thirsty street
drinks juice of life >> is sipping the juice
I am drying. >> I am growing dry
Bit by bit
hungry street
eats flesh of personality. >> is gorging the flesh
I am vanishing.
Beam by beam
dark street
absorbs light. >> the light
I am going out ... ?? Od kod pa tole in kakšen je pomen? V
izvirniku tega verza ni.
only small lamp is still dimly shining. >> a small
I am hoping!
Lep pozdrav!
Kerstin