Forgive me
forgive me you know I'm sorry
you know I think of you
you know I miss you

If I only knew you like me too
I would say to you that I love you
I would open my heart for you

(heard je past in past participle glagola hear!)

I can't stop thinkin' about you
all I do is always about you
and you and you

So how can you forgive me
about what I do
and take your heart apart >>???

Just try to forgive me
I know what I do
I know I have really hurt you
I do I do

I don't know what to do
to make you feel as I do

I know to say I'm sorry is not enough
I know it's not enough for you
because you deserve much more than I do

But you are always on my mind
and so I ask you
can you find it in yourself to forgive
me what I do
and say I love you too

To je zdaj pravilen prepis tvojega besedila. Preden začneš pisati v tujem jeziku, se moraš naučiti osnov njegovega pravopisa. Besedišče pesmi je zelo enostavno, banalno, zato je napake še teže spregledati.
Kaj si želel povedati s "take your heart apart"?

Prevedi si pesem v slovenščino, da boš videl, kje še šepa - namreč vsebinsko. Potem pa ponovno poskusi. Če ne gre drugače, pa s slovarjem, gotovo ga imaš tudi na računalniku.

Lep pozdrav!
Kerstin

Forgive me avtor Markow7