
With smiles the angel does not heal my wounds,
I wander through shadows, where sorrow looms.
A dancer's light flickers under the glow,
Yet deep in my heart, it's the pain you don't know.
I twirl for the dream, for the life they adore,
But each coin I gather feels heavy with more.
A stripper’s soul, though adorned in delight,
Hides echoes of battles that vanish from sight.
You’d be a fine jewel in this fractured crown,
But still, I am tethered to the depths, feeling down.
In laughter and glances, the masks we all wear,
Conceal our true stories, our burdens we bear.
So dance I will boldly and sway to the beat,
But know in the silence, my heart feels defeat.
With smiles the angel cannot mend what I see,
In this shimmering world, I’m just longing to be.
Bolečina ob premišljevanju o našem času in posamezniku v njem. Pesem je zelo globoka in bi bilo fino, da bi bila tudi v slovenščini.
Ne vem, če sem zadovoljen s svojim prevodom mojega besedila - ampak bom pustil tako.
https://www.pesem.si/a/objava/prikaz/189492/moje_srce_cuti_le_poraz
Kar izgubljamo, naredi najmočnejši odtis v nas. Čestitke!
Milan Ž. - Jošt Š
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