You were there

You were there when tomorrows I feared

You were there when achievements I cheered

You were there for my weekend stay

And you even stayed there when I went away

 

I said she was beautiful

You said that is true

I wrote her a poem

The tears came from you

I wrote about many

While waited for new

And during that wait

You were there too

 

You gave me your love

I gave you my touch

Your eyes caressed me

While others I watched

Perhaps I could write

One cold distant dawn

When I will be lonely

And you will be gone

 

Or maybe that day will never come

Maybe I used you, like bench to cry on

I wish I felt guilty, pay tax on my sin

But I just feel the shame

for not feeling a thing

lukapirc

Maša GL

Poslano:
10. 11. 2024 ob 21:16

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Hors

Poslano:
10. 11. 2024 ob 21:49
Spremenjeno:
10. 11. 2024 ob 21:49

  

  Zlo dobri zadnji štirje verzi.


edit: 5*

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lukapirc

Poslano:
11. 11. 2024 ob 22:43

Hvala 

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Lidija Brezavšček - kočijaž

urednica

Poslano:
12. 11. 2024 ob 16:17

Res dober zaključek, ki tem rimam odpre nivo dimenzijo.

LpL

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