EARTH

From my archeological notes

 

WITHIN HEARTH

Period: Late Minoan, 1600-1500 BCE

Site: Petras, Crete, Aegean Sea

Migration of peoples

From the Near East

A flow of ideas

Intense contact

New genetic and cognitive maps

Patterns of civilization as deep as

The 10th millennium BCE

Deep deep deep

Imagine the distant space

And time

It had been moving

Inside the uterus

The infant's head

Near the mouth

Waiting for a new breath of air

Placed in a downward position

Inside a vessel

Inside a dwelling

So close to its mother

The body survived

 

In excellent condition

The sacred power

Of child death

 

Intramural inhumation

"We now know that the founders of

the first advanced European civilization were
European.«

Extramural inhumanity

 

WITHOUT H

Period: Early 21st Century

Site: off Petronium, Aegean Sea

A flow of people

From the Near East

Migration of Idea

Intense contact

Old genetic and cognitive maps

Patterns of civilization as deep as

The 10th millennium BC

Deep deep deep

Imagine the short space

And time

The child had been moving

Outside the uterus

The toddler's body

In prone position

Waiting for a new tidal wave

Outside a dwelling

Outside a vessel

So close to his Mother

The boy survived

 

By his Father

Agape

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Lidija Brezavšček - kočijaž

urednica

Poslano:
05. 09. 2015 ob 21:17
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05. 09. 2015 ob 19:17

Morda je komentar ob tej pesmi, ki nastala zato, ker je avtorico tako kot vse normalno čuteče ljudi prizadel pogled na truplo malega naplavljenega Alyana, čisto odveč ...

  Je odveč. Čestitke za izjemno pesem, ki s pozsebne pozicije, nekako odaljeno, a določno opiše sliko, ki te pribije v okvir žalosti.

 LP, Lidija

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Jupiter! Silvana Orel Kos

Poslano:
06. 09. 2015 ob 19:47
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06. 09. 2015 ob 17:47

Podoba dečka pretrese zaradi njegove konkretne zgodbe, tako velik del javnosti pa nagovarja tudi s svojo univerzalnostjo in možnostjo prenosa v osebno izkušnjo izgube otroka ali v strah pred takim dogodkom. Oba  odziva je moč zaznati v izjavi britanskega politika:

"Anyone who saw those pictures overnight could not help but be moved and, as a father, I felt deeply moved by the sight of that young boy on a beach in Turkey."

Po taki izjavi politika seveda lahko pričakujemo "but". Preletela sem zapise v časopisih, ki povzemajo izjavo:

David Cameron says he was deeply moved by the sight of a young boy found dead on a beach in Turkey.

David Cameron says he was deeply moved by the pictures of a three-year-old Syrian boy found drowned on a beach in Turkey.

David Cameron has said "as a father I felt deeply moved" by the image of a Syrian boy dead on a Turkish beach.

David Cameron has said that "as a father I felt deeply moved" by the tragic pictures of Syrian refugee Aylan Kurdi lying dead on a Turkish beach and promised that Britain would fulfil its "moral responsibilities".

David Cameron has said he felt "deeply moved" by pictures of the dead Syrian boy Aylan Kurdi washed up on a Turkish beach, but he gave no details of any new UK plans to take in more refugees.

With the story all over the front pages and critics urging a step change in the number of Syrians being offered sanctuary, Cameron said he was "deeply moved" by the harrowing image but defended the government's record and stuck to his position.

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Lidija Brezavšček - kočijaž

urednica

Poslano:
06. 09. 2015 ob 21:36
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06. 09. 2015 ob 19:36

no, pa imamo ...

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