Zame, yoda, pride v poštev od 17. - 21. maja, ko bom dosti v LJ. Ampak ti najbrž ne moreš med tednom iz kasarne kar v LJ skakat.
Sigi, morda bova pa morala midva k yodi na Belo :)))
LP, Lidija

Zna bit :D Bomo neki že zrihtal :)

Lidija tud med tednom bi se dal zment, sploh kakšnen petek!

Mene pa zanima, če kdo zna ful anglešk, da pregleda tale prevod manifesta! Potem bi te pa Sigi prosil, da še na angl. wikipedijo objaviš manifest...

Manifesto of Kruiku

Kruiku is a lyrical form which derives its basics from the classical japanese short-form poem called haiku. consisting of 17 moras (or on), in three phrases of 5, 7, and 5 moras respectively.[1] Although haiku are often stated to have 17 syllables,[2] this is inaccurate as syllables and moras are not the same. Haiku typically contain a kigo (seasonal reference), and a kireji (cutting word). The name itself derives from the words krut (cruel) and haiku, ergo kruiko.
Kruiko uses different impressions of nature and the surroundings of the authors life; it paints some sort of real, cruel event, a thing, an act or his tragical, unpleasant, horrifying and saddening consequence. Kruiko avoids metaphors and is written in a simplistic, un-decorative, un-repetitional, un-rhythmical and un-poetical way.
Kruiku quests towards a realistic presentation of problems, troubles, plights and the whole community of our civilization. As the haiku-teller expects that the reader lives his perception of nature and its surroundings, the author of kruiku, with his picturesque event, act and consequence, wants to awaken a sense of helplessness, resistance, sadness, plight, mercy, protest and forces a reader to became engaged. The reader is forced to be conscious that the world isn't beatiful, but change is in place:

Baby crying
hugging whats-left
of his mother.

Yoda

Sometimes an author pictures that the perception of the cruel world and resignation at the helplessness is a part of our reality:

Doggy at the road
his stretchéd tongue hanging
in his own brains
Yoda

Deviations with the structure are allowed, if with the adding and subtracting of syllables is achieved a greater message:

Traffic accident has 6
among the quashéd bodies 7
no drunkard of blamé. 6

It is not necessary that the kruiku is real, that the author has seen it, met it and lived it.
It can arise in the authors imagination, at watching the telly, at reading the paper and so on...but it has to be real:

In the pond the small boy
an arrow in the naked back
swims a swim of death
yoda

As kruiku talks a lot of actual events we can add places and dates...
The first who looked upon a chance kruiku overcoming hauku, named it so and introduced it to the slovenian lyrical genre, is a member of www.pesem.si - Mark Many a.k.a. Yoda.

Ja, Yoda, tole bo pa res treba kar "orng" lektorirat - to vidim že kar sama. Tekst je zelo pomanjkljivo preveden, zato nikar ne hiti z njim! Prav?
Če bi se jaz potrudila okrog tega, bi gotovo ostalo še kaj napak. Bolj FULL "ful") angleško od mene zna pa Kerstin, ker se s tem ukvarja in bomo prosili njo. Je pa res, da boš moral s tem kakšen teden, še bolj gotova pa dva, tri počakat, ker imamao trenutno zelo veliko dela s pripravo majskih in junijskih pesniških večerov v LJ.
Yoda, si si rezerviral junijskega? Računam nate.

LP, Lidija

Ja sej se mi zdel, da je treba velik popravt..
Ja junija skoraj zagotovo pridem, sam pa ne vem, če sem že pripravljen za branje svojih del!? Že sam večer bo zame nekej čist posebnega,; še nikoli nisem bil na takem ali kakem podobnem večeru, kaj šele, da bi nastopal...
Bom do takrat poskušal zbrati pogum!:))

Lp Y.

Mimogrede: na wikiju je svoje mesto našel tudi moj brahek. Ima tudi povezavo na kruiku, juhuhu! :) Članek je dokončno uredil Sigi, ker sem jaz kar zmrznila ob vseh pravilih in načinih, kako naj kaj stoji, leži, visi ... :) Hvala, Sigi.
http://sl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Brahek

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Kerstin