I push the shadows

I push the shadows off the walls, my friend,
With whispered light that tenderly cascades,
In corners where the silent echoes bend,
I seek the glow that through the darkness wades.

Each flicker dances, bold yet soft and clear,
As dawn unfolds its gentle, warming hand;
I chase the night, resolve to persevere,
And in the day’s embrace, together stand.

The shadows dim, but in their fleeting wane,
A tapestry of dreams begins to weave;
For every doubt and whisper born of pain,
A spark ignites, inviting us to believe.

So let us bask in light where shadows flee,
And find the strength in brightness, you and me.

Tomaž Jevšenak

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Poslano:
14. 01. 2025 ob 09:38

Kako dobro, ko se v dvoje odženejo sence!

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Lidija Brezavšček - kočijaž

urednica

Poslano:
17. 01. 2025 ob 18:40

Pohvala za  urejeno metriko in rimarsko ter ritmično doslednost! :)

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Matjaž Lutarič - Lynx

Poslano:
17. 01. 2025 ob 19:18

Super! Mogoče le predzadnji us ni ravno nujen...

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