
I push the shadows off the walls, my friend,
With whispered light that tenderly cascades,
In corners where the silent echoes bend,
I seek the glow that through the darkness wades.
Each flicker dances, bold yet soft and clear,
As dawn unfolds its gentle, warming hand;
I chase the night, resolve to persevere,
And in the day’s embrace, together stand.
The shadows dim, but in their fleeting wane,
A tapestry of dreams begins to weave;
For every doubt and whisper born of pain,
A spark ignites, inviting us to believe.
So let us bask in light where shadows flee,
And find the strength in brightness, you and me.
Pohvala za urejeno metriko in rimarsko ter ritmično doslednost! :)
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Napisal/a: Tomaž Jevšenak
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