Twilight
the full Moon is just rising
and so are we
i slip silently through the forest
silver Light is slowly waking up Shadows
so they can dance elegantly whit a clumsy tree.
on the clif
i brake the peaceful Silence of night
whit a loud passionate howl
love and hate, anger and faith,
all in
all out
not a usual sound, no this tme its differente
ts a call.
of thirst
for Blood.
Enough off human stinky smell taking Our teritory.
We must Fight back or we will all be shoot down and get stuffed like little
squirrels.
the hills howls back.
aaa-uuuuuuuuuu aaa uuuuuuuu
aaa-uuuuuuuuuu aaa uuuuuuuu
This wolf of yours speaks in a good provocative manner but it 'howls out' a lot of transcriptive and other mistakes. Sorry.
Bye,
A
No, nič hudega, napake se da pa ja popravit. Gremo najprej na čisto osnovne:
Twilight.
The full Moon is just rising
and so are we.
I slip silently through the forest,
silver Light is slowly waking up Shadows
so they can dance elegantly with a clumsy tree. (clumsy? a si prepričan?)
on the clif
I brake the peaceful Silence of the night
with a loud passionate howl
love and hate, anger and faith,
all in
all out
not an usual sound, no, this time it's different
it's a call
of thirst
for Blood.
Enough of that human stink taking Our teritory!
We must Fight back or we will all be shot down and get stuffed like little
squirrels.
The hills howl back.
aaa-uuuuuuuuuu aaa uuuuuuuu
aaa-uuuuuuuuuu aaa uuuuuuuu
Sploh ne znam popravit napak Blokada. Še to kar je nastalo je glede na moje poznavanje angleščine več kot odlično. :)
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